Rachel Bethany Evan (Fixed)

[akina]

Name; Rachel Bethany Evan
Age; 13
Gender; Female
Species; Human
Appearance; Rachel has long brown hair with blue eyes. She is still a little short yet, just 5'3" and still growing, she will reach a height of 5'5". She hasn't really hit her puberty yet but will shortly, though she is starting to get her figure. She has long legs and a medium sized torso.
Personality; Rachel is a fun loving teen, she does anything that involves adventure and risk and isn't afraid of anything. She loves all pokemon big and small. She is quick to anger and easy to befriend unless of course you make her mad or insult her. She is a bit competitive, she isn't exactly a sore loser or a sore winner but either way she doesn't like to lose. She is very determined to get out there on her own and make something of herself, eager to get her pokemon.
History; Rachel has been around pokemon all her life, her father being a retired pokemon trainer and her mom used to be a pokemon show-er. At an early age she was introduced to pokemon. Now she plans to become a pokemon trainer like her father.
Other; none

[tisari]

Pretty good. ^^ Maybe just a bit more to her personality? A sentence or two, and it'd be fine.
Also, it's alright that she has an Eevee, but make sure she's only level 5, and that's the only pokemon she can have. It's going to have to be her starter, so she won't be able to go to the lab to get another one- she's gotta start at Route 1.

So maybe just make sure she only has Chilli, add a bit more to her personality...
and then you can move her to...well, any route by any city to start her off, depending on where she's starting from. =D

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[Cricket]

The only problem I have is that we've not allowed anyone else from having their own starter pokemon, unless that pokemon was simply a companion and not really to fight with or anything.. And, I mean, I have nothign against this, but I wonder if it is fair to suddenly start now. ^^;;

[akina]

when she was little it was her companion she really didn't start training until recently. but yeah Chilli will start out on level 5 like any other pokemon. and i'll add to her personality in a bit

[Cricket]

^^ I know, the problem isn't that it's unfair because it's already trained, the problem is it's unfair because everyone else has to get a random pokemon, and doesn't get to pick their favorite pokemon to start with. Not that eevee is your favorite, because I don't know if it is or not, but it is still a pokemon quite a few people on here would want to start with and couldn't because their trainers went through the actual system.

D: I feel like such a party pooper. Don't worry about it though, I'll talk to Tisari and see how she feels. It isn't my decision to make, it's all of ours, so we'll see what happens. ^^ Worse cast scenario you can't do it yet and you see what pokemon you get by going through the system and then add it to your history and pretend you've had it the whole time. But, whatever, I'll talk to Tisari when she logs onto MSN and let you know soon.

[akina]

acctually Eevee isn't my fav just a random i can't really pick a fav pokemon but i know how it goes and its ok, acctually now that i think about it i would rather have a random pokemon just to see what i get. Chilli can just be a wild pokemon then, its a win win

[Cricket]

X3 Okay. Well, I'll be willing to accept once you finish, and make sure you go to the color picking thread to pick your name color. =)

[akina]

k i'll do that. and i've already finished her app, i added to the personality yesturday

[Cricket]

ccepted